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If the intent is telling a story with few images and you feel like you've got the content, maybe it's the arrangement? Sort of like trying to write a sentence with all the words in the wrong places. I think also we tend to feel more connected to our own images because we have the association of physically being there, so we see a lot more in an image than some on-looker might. Just a thought.
Some really nice shots in this set--a little odd though that nearly half of the images are during toasts. Unless that was a major component of the day?