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I really like your processing, it is very clean and consistent! I dont feel overly qualified to comment on engagement sessions because quite frankly, I havent done many! I will say that the images presented gives me a positive vibe about the couple. It seems as though you had a good photographer/client rapport with them!
For some reason, the novelty sunglasses 'cheapen' the polished look of the first four images. Not sure why (perhaps I'm just an elitist snob). But they dont jive with the polished feel of the images.
Images like 1 (minus the glasses), 4, 5, 7, 11 (minus the instrument) are your strong suit. They are simple, beautiful, and well executed. I can see you pushing the envelope a bit with images like 6 and 9....and that is definitely a good thing...but I dont think they work. It seems what when you strayed from your classy, well posed shots and tried to get creative the shots came off as a bit forced.
All in all, very nice work!