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| p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · A Hawaiian destination wedding ( 21 images ) |
Really nice stuff JM. This is one of the few posts I'd look through and wished I could see more. Give the people what they want!
I've always admired your hunger for creativity in your work, so it's always fun to see what you're coming up with. As you shoot better weddings, there will be a part of you that tries to convince yourself to play it more safe. Don't do that.
Everything is solid, so here's a few specific thoughts...
This is an interesting capture and positioning them under the mountain was a cool decision. I'm not sure if I love that or not, but it certainly was the most interesting place to put them. To improve this, I would have controlled your spill more on the ground. I think the grass takes away from and otherwise great image:
This one needs more development I think. Maybe try having them look at you or goof off a bit. As is, it's just a little too much nostril:
I think the tone of this is pretty. I wish the focus was on the centerpiece though. Right now there's not really a focal point. Maybe you should learn how to microadjust