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First, tighten up your set. I think you have MANY quality shots here, but how many are actually at the core of your brand? I dont think anyone would argue that what you have here is well done, but I do think you'd have a hard time getting a stranger to identify your brand in a succinct fashion. I have seen the benefits of shortening my blog sets when prospective brides tell me in their words what I consider to be my core identity as a photographer. This is the first step to developing a happy client relationship.
For example, shots 1, 5, 6, 8 are super classy, clean refined shots with great light. Showing just those 4 for getting ready would give a completely different feel to the set and make 'you' more identifiable in the market. Once you hone in on that, drive at developing this identity.
I dont really have any crits on the photography as it's all generally well done, clean, and consistent.