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I see two things that you did very well in this set:
1) there is a lot of energy coming off of the images. images like 2, 6, 12, 17, 19, 20 and the reception shots seem to have a lot of movement. this creates a very dynamic set!
2) you did a great job of setting the scene for this wedding. there is a lot of context included in many of your images! images 1, 3, 9, 10, 12, 13, 17 really demonstrate this point.
Moving forward, I think a few things could be improved:
1) you seem to have a keen eye for interesting documentary images. for example, 9. but the people need to be doing something more interesting for it to work for me. trust me, i know how frustrating that can be because its really out of your hands. but maybe in that case, you decide not to include it?
2) same for 17. great comp and i love the inclusion of the lady's expression, but get in there! as tony mentioned, go get the shot!