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Nice first out for sure. Need bounce flash, fill flash outside, (especially need lighting for formals) and work on grouping on your formals (the one you posted needs to be rearranged, tighten, and watch the hands and sunglasses).
As you pointed out, you forget to get some of the shots you had planned. This is normal and one of the biggest things people find out when taken on wedding photograph. It is hectic and schedules never happen as planned. Have to roll with the flow and be everywhere at all times!
With this said, I am sure the B&G will like these, you captured some nice moments and you have a good eye.
Edit: I am not a fan of the Bride's side on shot either, it does not flatter her figure. Looks like you were trying to capture her tattooed arm, which is fine, however it makes her look larger than she is.