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This was a set that I looked at and had a different opinion of many of the posters so I decided not to give feedback.
Overall, I'd classify the set as "serviceable". I say the same thing about some of my blog sets as well!
#3 is a nice moment, but i feel that the bride is in such an awkward position with her head completely turned.
#4 is a miss for me. I think it's too OOF to be in the blog post. I think the shot there is the mom anyway.
#5-8 i think you handled the harsh conditions quite well.
#9 is a pretty boring image for me. I wonder if there could have been a more interesting/creative way to showcase the carriage?
#10 is sort of what i was talking about. but i think working a bit closer with a wider lens would give a more intimate feel to the moment. maybe being closer there and having dad help his little girl out of the carriage would have been better?
#11 and 12 are good. i like these. center comps work here.
#13-17 are OK and fall into the 'serviceable' category. nothing wrong with them, nothing standing out for me.
#19 is a miss. too OOF.
#21-23 are nice shots for sure. i like the solo of the bride a lot. maybe the best shot of the set.
#24 i just dont get. i think you were trying to get a sense of the venue/environment...but maybe pull back wider and get more interior?
#25 is good...maybe BW?
#28 is just a whatever shot. def deliver, but nothing special for the blog.
i'm just not so sure that there is anything here that is all that different from 80% of wedding photography out there. and i dont know that it has to be 'different' per se, but the presentation just doesnt seem pointed/aimed
i also think that a lot of the telephoto adds to a bit of a distant feel to your photography. try getting closer and use wider focal lengths at parts of the day other than the getting ready.