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| p.1 #18 · Country Wedding (32 pics) |
Brian Virts wrote:
Be as critical as you want, just please suggest where to go from here. I've thought about incorporating more artificial light, but I just hate the look of it.
Your work is very finished looking. Based on only that fact, I'd imagine that you're busier than a lot of people. It would be very easy to consider hiring you. Most of the photos are really solid from this wedding, but here's some of the negatives that stood out to me..
This isn't the best light and I find it awkward that they're looking at the camera from so far away.
This is a good moment, but you missed the framing. The left half of this needs to be cropped or eliminated in camera. Or move to the right.
Then there were a few images that I can see why you liked, but don't make the bride look very good... which should be the priority.... Here's two:
Compare that to how thin she looks here and you'll see how your angles in the previous two shots were unsuccessful: