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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Yellowston River


Taken before spring, playing with the post process. Thanks for looking. Gary







Jul 05, 2013 at 12:46 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Yellowston River


Not quite sure of the look you are going for - retro faded Kodachrome?

The curve of the stream works well compositionally, but the image, IMO, is overwhelmed by the blown out sky, drawing the eye from the scene.

Also, the drop shadow coupled with matted frame are, again, imo, incongruous. If you have a RAW original, you could maybe recover some highlights and tackle this one again?

Regards,

Bob



Jul 05, 2013 at 06:04 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Yellowston River


Much of the look is personal preference
To me, the blown out sky is detracting
I also would like some more shadow detail; feels a bit muddied as is
Scott



Jul 08, 2013 at 12:33 AM





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