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p.1 #1 · More of the lily


Still learning the PP thing. Thanx for looking.






Edited on Jul 05, 2013 at 06:18 PM · View previous versions



Jul 04, 2013 at 09:11 PM
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p.1 #2 · More of the lily


I think this was nicely done. I don't see any blown out white areas. There are some nice fronds in the midground and blacked out areas in the background.


Jul 04, 2013 at 11:10 PM
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p.1 #3 · More of the lily


The color balance is a little off.







Jul 05, 2013 at 03:24 PM
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p.1 #4 · More of the lily


Nice image and I agree re color balance. Quite an extensive DOF for this one.

Nit: Lighting is flat but probably something beyond your control - hint of depth would be nice.

Would be interested in the exif.

Regards,

Bob



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p.1 #5 · More of the lily


Maybe it is my eyes or my monitor, but the second version seems too warm. I like the greens in the original version.


Jul 05, 2013 at 08:46 PM
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p.1 #6 · More of the lily


As I sit outside next to the flower, the colors seem almost exact, but my monitor is not calibrated, some thing else I get to learn. Thank you for any and all the feedback.


Jul 06, 2013 at 12:29 AM
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p.1 #7 · More of the lily


Very nicely composed with good control over the whites
I am thinking color temp bet the original and rework
Scott



Jul 08, 2013 at 12:25 AM





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