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Thanks for the comments.
Ben, I also wish that there was more light in his eyes. I actually lightened them in post but didn't want to go too far to look unnatural. This was just the best shot of a series. I wish I had just asked him to turn his head a little more to the window. These little mistakes keep me thinking for the next time.
SGallant, definitely don't mind your suggestions or cropping. I'm here to learn. I have a thick skin and really appreciate people taking the time to give their input. I tried a similar cropping, and others, but for whatever reasons just keep coming back to how it was shot. I can see what you mean though, with his body going on . . .