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sbeme
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Here are three images I am uncertain about
To me, the main issues are crop and DOF.
Which, if any work for you?
Since reshooting just aint gonna happen, any processing thoughts, esp about crop?
Thanks
btw, not much more on the left in the originals.

Scott



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Jul 02, 2013 at 06:43 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · young zebras


I was done @ #1 without even scrolling down. Then after scrolling down ... yup #1, much goodness.


Jul 02, 2013 at 07:06 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · young zebras


#1. The angle of the head is more engaging and animated.


Jul 02, 2013 at 08:17 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · young zebras


3 for 1


Jul 02, 2013 at 08:25 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · young zebras


Its interesting.
I like the angle and implied attitude best in the first as well.
But if feels like the body proportions are most odd in the first, making me wonder about cropping from the left.
Maybe the zebra's attitude trumps all; or I am just too self-critical



Jul 02, 2013 at 08:30 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · young zebras


#1. I would clone out that weed next to the snout. I at first thought it was a cloning mistake before seeing the others. The other two are nice too, so you really could go with any of them. I just find #1 a bit more interesting/engaging. - Paul


Jul 03, 2013 at 12:43 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · young zebras


#1 although I agree with you about the proportion of the body...

or...

Bob


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Jul 03, 2013 at 05:05 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · young zebras


pinball_pw wrote:
#1. I would clone out that weed next to the snout. I at first thought it was a cloning mistake before seeing the others. The other two are nice too, so you really could go with any of them. I just find #1 a bit more interesting/engaging. - Paul

thx Paul.
Seems like a consensus on the first
Scott



Jul 10, 2013 at 03:02 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · young zebras


thanks Bob.
all the reworks look good to me and of course BW is well-suited to the subject
Scott



Jul 10, 2013 at 03:03 PM





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