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back in black by wally5656, on Flickr



Jun 24, 2013 at 08:24 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Back in Black


Love it.


Jun 25, 2013 at 05:32 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Back in Black


Hmm, needs fill flash on the subjects, crop to the right maybe a little too tight and probably a little space between the bike and the car.


Jun 25, 2013 at 05:53 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Back in Black


cool use of hdr


Jun 25, 2013 at 02:44 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Back in Black


Not feeling this picture. Cropping and spacing is a little off and the woman's skin tone looks off to me.


Jun 25, 2013 at 03:56 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Back in Black


This could be a nice dramatic "sky" picture. I don't think the artifacts in upper right of the frame look good, however. The car and people need more light too.

Getting picky in this comment, but maybe a composition change would help too. The car, facing right, has no "room" in front. The bike, also facing right has unneeded "room" to the left. Put the bike and car so they face inwards or some other arrangement.



Jul 01, 2013 at 12:06 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Back in Black


Thanks for the comments and critique, thats how we learn!



Jul 04, 2013 at 11:08 AM





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