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I think this is a strong set overall. I think you do the storyboard style pretty well. I tend to dislike storyboard style posts because I think a lot of weak photos get included and the sheer number of images negates a really good presentation. There's very little of that here though. I think that you do a good job of showing your best stuff the biggest. With that said, I think you could tell this exact same story with about 40% less images. There's just a lot of repeats.
One example of what I mentioned this earlier. Since you're blogging so many photos, it's easier to overlook the weak ones. But you have so many strong ones that I don't think you need to show the weaker ones. This dress photo just looks so much less refined than most of the others in the set:
Same with this:
This image is beautiful in content and in tone!
And I think you have a good way of showing your humor through a simple catch like this:
Sorry for not much critique, but I really think you could eliminate a lot here and have a much stronger set. There's not really bad images here, but I'm guessing you blogged close to 100 images. That's just a lot! I looked through the whole set twice in detail and feel like I can't remember any except for a few. To me, that's the problem with having several versions of similar scenes.