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mineymole
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p.1 #1 · Summer Camp Wedding


In the Catskills a couple of weeks ago. Sorry for the long post, but this is their story pulled from my blog.

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Jun 24, 2013 at 10:25 PM
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p.1 #2 · Summer Camp Wedding


I tend to avoid long posts with lots of images, but I want to see more! And no, I'm not saying that because I love you. I'm saying that because you killed this one.


Jun 24, 2013 at 10:41 PM
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p.1 #3 · Summer Camp Wedding


ya real good.
a little to much green for my taste as far as processing goes but that is personal preference.
18 is about as good as it gets. she is smoking hot in that one.



Jun 25, 2013 at 12:26 AM
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p.1 #4 · Summer Camp Wedding


beautiful capture...


Jun 25, 2013 at 02:30 AM
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p.1 #5 · Summer Camp Wedding


maxwell1295 wrote:
I tend to avoid long posts with lots of images, but I want to see more! And no, I'm not saying that because I love you. I'm saying that because you killed this one.



Thanks Alan!



Jun 25, 2013 at 12:14 PM
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hardlyboring wrote:
ya real good.
a little to much green for my taste as far as processing goes but that is personal preference.
18 is about as good as it gets. she is smoking hot in that one.



It was a very green day! Thanks Doug!



Jun 25, 2013 at 12:15 PM
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Great work, but man that dock looks like it could go at any minute with nothing supporting it on the front end. I would have been scared to death to have them walk out there wonderful set though!

Greg



Jun 25, 2013 at 02:29 PM
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p.1 #8 · Summer Camp Wedding


beautiful wedding and gorgeous photos! I really dig 51 haha =D


Jun 25, 2013 at 02:31 PM
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p.1 #9 · Summer Camp Wedding


Actually the dock was made of steel.... it wasn't going anywhere!


Jun 25, 2013 at 02:44 PM
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Thanks Yangy and Mjoshi


Jun 26, 2013 at 12:33 PM
 

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p.1 #11 · Summer Camp Wedding


Amazing coverage, I like a good overcast day wedding. It sure makes everything easy to balance out, well done!


Jun 26, 2013 at 01:43 PM
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p.1 #12 · Summer Camp Wedding


Thanks Brian!


Jun 26, 2013 at 01:51 PM
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p.1 #13 · Summer Camp Wedding


Man, I'm in love with your work (and that venue!) Superb job with this one!


Jul 02, 2013 at 05:02 AM
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p.1 #14 · Summer Camp Wedding


Thanks jdpage!


Jul 02, 2013 at 02:29 PM
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Hey Diane,
I think this is a strong set overall. I think you do the storyboard style pretty well. I tend to dislike storyboard style posts because I think a lot of weak photos get included and the sheer number of images negates a really good presentation. There's very little of that here though. I think that you do a good job of showing your best stuff the biggest. With that said, I think you could tell this exact same story with about 40% less images. There's just a lot of repeats.

One example of what I mentioned this earlier. Since you're blogging so many photos, it's easier to overlook the weak ones. But you have so many strong ones that I don't think you need to show the weaker ones. This dress photo just looks so much less refined than most of the others in the set:






Same with this:






This image is beautiful in content and in tone!






And I think you have a good way of showing your humor through a simple catch like this:






Sorry for not much critique, but I really think you could eliminate a lot here and have a much stronger set. There's not really bad images here, but I'm guessing you blogged close to 100 images. That's just a lot! I looked through the whole set twice in detail and feel like I can't remember any except for a few. To me, that's the problem with having several versions of similar scenes.



Jul 21, 2013 at 03:45 AM
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p.1 #16 · Summer Camp Wedding


I really enjoy this set. I feel that I am immersed into the event. Thanks!


Jul 21, 2013 at 04:50 AM
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p.1 #17 · Summer Camp Wedding


I really enjoyed it. You are so good! NJ!


Jul 21, 2013 at 04:52 AM
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p.1 #18 · Summer Camp Wedding


Thank you Tony!


Jul 21, 2013 at 09:43 PM
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p.1 #19 · Summer Camp Wedding


mineymole wrote:
It was a very green day!


the Catskills are green in the summer - great location




Jul 22, 2013 at 10:28 AM
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p.1 #20 · Summer Camp Wedding


It's really hard to critique someone who would be on my shortlist of photographers if I were getting married today.

Your view of a wedding day is inclusive, natural, and simple...and I really dig it. You captured genuine moments that will be cherished for generations:







































My critique would be that you show too many shots I know that sounds silly, but I think this set would be stronger with less images. The detail shots just dont seem as refined and meaningful as your other shots and there seems to be more of them than shots with people? So shots above sort of get 'lost' in a sense.



Jul 23, 2013 at 08:25 PM
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