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p.1 #1 · Pillars and shadows


Taken with my 5D and new-to-me 70-200 2.8 IS v1.

Your thoughts? Wondering if I should make the second one a little darker?







Jun 13, 2013 at 10:27 PM
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p.1 #2 · Pillars and shadows


Besides the question of darkening the second, can you clarify what your questions and goals were with these images?
Scott



Jun 14, 2013 at 12:09 AM
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p.1 #3 · Pillars and shadows


Well, the main goal was to try out the lens.

I liked the first image with the large well illuminated structure and the lone bench looking tiny in comparison, but I don't think the bench has as much prominence as it could.

I liked the second image because I thought the contrast between the afternoon light and the shadows worked pretty well. Was somewhat trying to imitate other pillar/shadow images I've seen.




Jun 14, 2013 at 09:03 PM
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p.1 #4 · Pillars and shadows


First could use some perspective correction. Building appears to be leaning away. No fault of the lens.
Should be a nice lens to work with. Are you planning to do some portraits with it? Add a tele-extender?

Scott



Jun 15, 2013 at 03:10 AM





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