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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Nature's Path ...


Following Fibonacci







Jun 08, 2013 at 12:26 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Nature's Path ...


i like... maybe a vertical flip?

high iso?



Jun 08, 2013 at 01:22 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Nature's Path ...


i like... maybe a vertical flip?

high iso?



Jun 08, 2013 at 01:28 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Nature's Path ...


Thanks.

ISO 100 ... grain added.



Jun 08, 2013 at 08:08 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Nature's Path ...


How does it look without the grain?
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Jun 08, 2013 at 09:07 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Nature's Path ...


sbeme wrote:
How does it look without the grain?
Scott


Just soft & fuzzy, not soft,fuzzy and grainy ...

Never really got it where I wanted it (close enough for concept) ... so, likely more of a draft for a possible re-shoot. I think my lighting was too low-contrast and I had to push things a bit harder in post than I would have liked, so I tossed in the grain for a possible "save". Curious @ how print vs. screen might translate, but since I have such little background in printing ...

I'm feeling this one kinda "large" if I can get it right (might take a while). Thoughts







Jun 08, 2013 at 09:55 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Nature's Path ...


Perhaps some exposure layer tweaks?












Jun 08, 2013 at 04:17 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Nature's Path ...


Good to see the BW approach.

Next time maybe try for not such an abrupt fall-off in tone, I don't think it helps here. Also not fond of the grain ( bet you never thought you would here that from me ).

Looking for ward to the re-shoot,

Bob



Jun 08, 2013 at 05:00 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Nature's Path ...


the good ol' Fibonacci Sequence...we used it as a design tool in school...I like the leading line it creates, and I like the motion generated by the OOF areas. I also like the lighter toning, makes it feel softer, conveying the softness of the flower.


Jun 10, 2013 at 11:37 AM





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