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Not sure what you could've done to perfect No. 1. Background is better than No. 2, and light is on his face better. This is exactly the way this shot is supposed to be done, in my vision anyway. Very, very nicely done! But I am curious what you think could have been better.
I'm a pixel peeper of sorts, and the draw back of a slow shutter speed to capture the movement is that it was difficult to get the rider tack sharp. That's what I would try to perfect if I ever did it again. Maybe increase the shutter speed a 1/2 a stop to prevent the camera shake.