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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Cinque Terre Sunset


Photo I took during my honeymoon.







May 23, 2013 at 03:39 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Cinque Terre Sunset


You are at an interesting coastline. But there are probably two things that hurt this shot. First, the WB is off quite a bit, the cyan cast making the shot look almost green doesn't work. Then second, there is no real visual point of interest for the eye to go to. Perhaps brightening up the foreground rocks on the right side a bit more, or if there had been a boat in the water would have helped.

Check out this thread for an idea: http://www.fredmiranda.com/forum/topic/1214865

Jim



May 23, 2013 at 04:41 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Cinque Terre Sunset


JimFox wrote:
First, the WB is off quite a bit, the cyan cast making the shot look almost green doesn't work.

Jim


doesn't look green on my monitor



May 24, 2013 at 10:27 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Cinque Terre Sunset


I agree, there isn't really a main point of interest in the photo

There's not a lot of colour in the sky, often the peak colour only lasts a few minutes



May 24, 2013 at 11:11 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Cinque Terre Sunset


Thanks everyone. I thought I missed a majority of the colors in the sky. I will go back and edit again.


May 24, 2013 at 01:21 PM





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