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ben egbert
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p.1 #1 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


I have a tendency to prefer ultra wide angle, maybe my eyes are spaced too far apart :-)

I search for trees to include at the corners which almost always means UWA. But this time I also shot a longer focal length which could probably be done from many locations.

Edit to add crop of 16x9 crop

Ok, here is a crop of the 18mm don't see a way to add it to the poll however.




18mm version






35mm version






16x9 crop of the 18mm version



Edited on May 17, 2013 at 10:34 AM · View previous versions



May 17, 2013 at 09:19 AM
John Richter
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p.1 #2 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


Hi Ben,

I don't see any pics.

JBR



May 17, 2013 at 09:20 AM
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p.1 #3 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


John Richter wrote:
Hi Ben,

I don't see any pics.

JBR


Yep when you start a poll you can't include images until you edit, (as far as I can see) I was editing while you were replying., They should be up now.



May 17, 2013 at 09:21 AM
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p.1 #4 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


Hey Ben,

Both are wonderful shots. I chose the 18mm though because the nice green trees and foliage add a lot more depth to the photo in my eyes. Nicely done.

JBR



May 17, 2013 at 09:25 AM
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p.1 #5 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


Lovely shots. I like the 35mm version which shows the reflections in the water/river more vividly.
At what time did you take these? My October shooting place-to-be!
Kee



May 17, 2013 at 09:37 AM
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p.1 #6 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


I like them both. Tough call. As is, I prefer the 35 mm version. I do like the foreground trees in the 18 mm version but I would crop out about half of the sky.


May 17, 2013 at 09:39 AM
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p.1 #7 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


I agree with Camper, less sky so it focuses our eyes into the valley.


May 17, 2013 at 09:43 AM
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p.1 #8 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


Hey Ben,

I will echo Jim's comments. Both are great, but go to a pano crop and lose most of the sky. You should have had a 'both' option on your poll.

Jim



May 17, 2013 at 09:44 AM
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p.1 #9 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


rhee wrote:
Lovely shots. I like the 35mm version which shows the reflections in the water/river more vividly.
At what time did you take these? My October shooting place-to-be!
Kee


This was a week ago Tuesday. I had half a day rain free and this was part of that half. This is a sunrise place. The rocks are pretty drab in full sun, it takes golden light. A month earlier I get even better light but a lousy composition with even more sky. I went back and worked at getting less sky. I placed the sky at the 2/3 line.

The only practical way to get those trees included is to go wide which includes too much sky so you would need a 16x9 crop later which is easy to do, There is a rock guard wall to the left that needs to be eliminated and prevents stepping back further.





May 17, 2013 at 09:50 AM
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p.1 #10 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


My experience there is that a 35mm on full frame is about perfect. After that you can get creative.


May 17, 2013 at 10:03 AM
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p.1 #11 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


Love the second one, Ben, for its detail. Normally, I might prefer the wider view, but the sky just isn't adding anything. I do kinda like the trees, so the 16 x 9 crop works for me. You know, I really admire the way you keep working to improve given scenes.


May 17, 2013 at 10:35 AM
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p.1 #12 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


Hey Ben,
I voted for #1...wish there was more room at the bottom under the tree in it.



May 17, 2013 at 10:37 AM
ben egbert
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p.1 #13 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


stanparker wrote:
Love the second one, Ben, for its detail. Normally, I might prefer the wider view, but the sky just isn't adding anything. I do kinda like the trees, so the 16 x 9 crop would work for me. You know, I really admire the way you keep working to improve given scenes.


Thanks, I am not done with this one. I spent way too many sunrise at Mesa Arch. I want to use the results of this poll to help me do the next one better. And you can get better light than this. If the full sun touches the cliffs as soon as it breaks above the horizon, it is sweet. This was maybe 20 minutes later as the sun had to clear some low clouds.



May 17, 2013 at 10:40 AM
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p.1 #14 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


Sunny Sra wrote:
Hey Ben,
I voted for #1...wish there was more room at the bottom under the tree in it.


I wanted to while I was there but that rock at the foreground blocks the bottom of the tree. Also you are angling to avoid the guard wall at the left.



May 17, 2013 at 10:42 AM
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p.1 #15 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


I like the slightly tighter crop of the second image.


May 17, 2013 at 10:47 AM
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p.1 #16 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


ckcarr wrote:
My experience there is that a 35mm on full frame is about perfect. After that you can get creative.


In fact I always check your web page for compositional ideas around Moab. This is how I choose the wider shot. It does sow the main feature best, IE the bend of the river.



May 17, 2013 at 11:21 AM
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p.1 #17 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


Really like the pano crop Ben, very nice image.


May 17, 2013 at 11:48 AM
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p.1 #18 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


Yes! That crop you added really works for me.


May 17, 2013 at 03:57 PM
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p.1 #19 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


Thanks Travis and Jim. Now I need to buy another 16x9 aspect frame. My only other frame like that is in use. But this is a common problem for UWA shots, they often need either foreground or sky eliminated.


May 17, 2013 at 04:04 PM
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p.1 #20 · Deadhorse point 2 to choose


Hey Ben,
You got some great shots from this area. I was going with the 35mm version but your edited 18mm panorama crop seems to be my personal favorite now.
Thanks for sharing!
Fred



May 17, 2013 at 04:09 PM
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