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p.1 #1 · My first e-session ever


Hi guys.
I made my first e sesh ever.
I'll link it from my Flickr page. I know it's quite against the rules post from personal site, pages etc, but it's the only place is online right now.
Any feedback is appreciated.
Thanks

http://www.flickr.com/photos/pette34/sets/72157633529522175/

Edited on May 20, 2013 at 05:45 PM · View previous versions



May 16, 2013 at 09:34 PM
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p.1 #2 · My first e-session ever


It definitely helps if you post the actual images in the thread, with numbers. Because you didn't, that is probably the main reason why you're not getting any feedback as of yet.

With that said, I checked them out on FB. And they're nice. WAY better than my first engagement session, that's for sure.

As for the images, there is one where it's a wider shot and they're walking up the path framed bottom left. I would lighten them up a little bit. They kinda' get lost in the shadows.

The OCF work is actually pretty good, but be careful with people with skin like the bride-to-be has. It can add a lot of contrast/lines/shadows to her face, which isn't necessarily flattering.




May 17, 2013 at 04:25 PM
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p.1 #3 · My first e-session ever


www.imgur.com is free.


May 17, 2013 at 04:36 PM
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p.1 #4 · My first e-session ever


uploaded on flickr and numbered.
thanks



May 20, 2013 at 05:45 PM
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p.1 #5 · My first e-session ever


I love your processing and your OCF.

Not a big fan of this.. just seems like an awkward composition with only the heads showing up.. and the pose seems a little too rigid too.




May 20, 2013 at 06:14 PM
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p.1 #6 · My first e-session ever


how can I explain that in English?
Well...
there was a little "gutter" to make for the couple because the balconade was too high and they disappear
so they're on balance on this little "gutter".
she's got heels too...but she's little anyway



May 20, 2013 at 06:21 PM
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p.1 #7 · My first e-session ever


oh..thanks for the positive feedback.


May 20, 2013 at 06:24 PM
 

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p.1 #8 · My first e-session ever


Prettym1k3 wrote:
It definitely helps if you post the actual images in the thread, with numbers. Because you didn't, that is probably the main reason why you're not getting any feedback as of yet.

With that said, I checked them out on FB. And they're nice. WAY better than my first engagement session, that's for sure.

As for the images, there is one where it's a wider shot and they're walking up the path framed bottom left. I would lighten them up a little bit. They kinda' get lost in the shadows.

The OCF work is actually pretty good, but be careful with people with
...Show more

thanks for the tips on the skin



May 24, 2013 at 06:09 PM
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p.1 #9 · My first e-session ever


I think they are too cold. The ones that are stopped down are too faded.

This is your best IMO.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/pette34/8758825944/



May 24, 2013 at 06:47 PM
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p.1 #10 · My first e-session ever


amonline wrote:
I think they are too cold. The ones that are stopped down are too faded.

This is your best IMO.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/pette34/8758825944/


i miss the meaning of "faded"..sorry



May 24, 2013 at 07:10 PM
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p.1 #11 · My first e-session ever


Prettym1k3 wrote:
It definitely helps if you post the actual images in the thread, with numbers. Because you didn't, that is probably the main reason why you're not getting any feedback as of yet.

With that said, I checked them out on FB. And they're nice. WAY better than my first engagement session, that's for sure.

As for the images, there is one where it's a wider shot and they're walking up the path framed bottom left. I would lighten them up a little bit. They kinda' get lost in the shadows.

The OCF work is actually pretty good, but be careful with people with
...Show more


What does OCF stand for?



May 28, 2013 at 07:38 PM
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p.1 #12 · My first e-session ever


off camera flash


May 29, 2013 at 09:04 AM
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p.1 #13 · My first e-session ever


That's pretty close to my style so I like em


May 29, 2013 at 05:52 PM
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p.1 #14 · My first e-session ever


Very nice set.


May 30, 2013 at 12:22 AM





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