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Alright, here are my 2 cents. I am not a pro, but just going from what I've seen here on FM and elsewhere.
Is she a cosplayer or a belly dancer? Either way, I'd like to see more of her in the shot to tell the story. Since these are people who dress up, I would want to see the whole attire, maybe even some of the background if this is a festival of sorts. Cosplayers can usually pose in a way related to their character and belly dancers can dance or sway (you can play with shutter speed on this one).
To be completely honest, this shot is too tight for my liking and looks a little strange from a stranger's perspective since it looks like she's leaning over and someone else is also in the background. Again, the story aspect. It's unclear what you're trying to show, therefore I have so many questions or rather, I am distracted. Also, her limbs (particularly her left arm) is cut-off. Finally, it looks like you missed focus by just a little bit, her bangle(?) is much sharper than her face.
I am curious what else you have from this set, but I will hold off on clicking for more, as I am at work right now.