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Mark Kuroda
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Engagement shoot in San Francisco.


Hi All,

Just shot this in San Francisco.

http://www.kurodablog.com/?p=2028

Mark












Edited on May 13, 2013 at 11:53 PM · View previous versions



May 13, 2013 at 05:45 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Engagement shoot in San Francisco.


Overall, I think you did a great job! The shot you posted here would be much better with each of them on their own, but together, they're competing for attention IMO. On your blog, I love the B&W shots and the one of them sitting in front of the fence, though.


May 13, 2013 at 06:11 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Engagement shoot in San Francisco.


Hmm sorry to say it but I'm not a massive fan of this one. Really sorry. The sky and exposure looks good but the composition is off in quite a few ways. The guys is not quite central but not far off enough to be deliberate. You're not quite square on to the building and there's a few ugly things in it (drainpipe, power thingy etc etc).

Sort those out though and you'll have a great shot.



May 13, 2013 at 06:32 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Engagement shoot in San Francisco.


ai3x wrote:
Hmm sorry to say it but I'm not a massive fan of this one. Really sorry. The sky and exposure looks good but the composition is off in quite a few ways. The guys is not quite central but not far off enough to be deliberate. You're not quite square on to the building and there's a few ugly things in it (drainpipe, power thingy etc etc).

Sort those out though and you'll have a great shot.


+1



May 13, 2013 at 06:41 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Engagement shoot in San Francisco.


Since ppl didn't seem to be clicking to the blog post, anyway, i uploaded different ones.


May 13, 2013 at 07:03 PM





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