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odnanref
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p.1 #1 · Desert images


Which images do you prefer? What can I do to improve on the images you like?

1)
DSC_0920.jpg by addictedtoglass, on Flickr

2)
DSC_0913.jpg by addictedtoglass, on Flickr

3)
DSC_0912.jpg by addictedtoglass, on Flickr



May 11, 2013 at 12:07 PM
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p.1 #2 · Desert images


#1 works more for me.

I dig the interplay of light/dark that accompanies the distance/spatial relationship.



May 11, 2013 at 12:45 PM
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p.1 #3 · Desert images


what can you do beyond this? the first one is really amazing, maybe the camera could have gone lower.

buy a new camera... this one isn't good enough for you anymore

though composition isn't working in #2 & #3



May 11, 2013 at 01:42 PM
 

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p.1 #4 · Desert images


what don't you like about the composition in 2 and 3?


May 11, 2013 at 05:14 PM
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p.1 #5 · Desert images


Really like the first one as well, for the reasons Kent articulated.
My own inclination would be to crop from the bottom, making a bit more of a triangular shape of the bottom-most sands, echoing the more sharply pointed shapes of the lighter sands above.
Second and third feel more aimless, wandering after the wonderful play of shape, light and dark in the first.
First deserves print and framing. Nice work!!

Scott



May 12, 2013 at 01:37 AM
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p.1 #6 · Desert images


i like the triangle shape that forms when cropping from the bottom. thanks for the suggestion!


May 12, 2013 at 01:25 PM





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