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Its been quite some time since i posted in FM. Your picture made me post this .
First off, am not an experienced photographer as most fellow FM's around. So, do take my suggestions with a pinch of salt.
I love your creativity here. Like you, i love contrast. But i would work this shot a bit more. The fact that veil is in focus puts this picture in a set rather than a standalone shot.
But if i were to make it a standalone one, i would focus on the couple. Specifically on their eyes. Would try a couple of snaps with their eyes closed as well as open. Am guessing the closed one will work better adding a bit of emotion...
What adds to that is the veil covering rest of their face revealing only the eyes and forehead has a dramatic effect. May be lit up their face a bit more as well.
Just a suggestion. I loved the photograph as it is. Brilliant creativity.