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beavens
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Tree With Hawk


This honestly was more of a "would like to know what kind of bird is in that tree over there" kind of shot, but I like its simplicity.

Due to really liking how the tree looked, the hawk takes a bit of searching for.

I guess I'd like to know if it's worth a view or should be left by the wayside.

Cheers!




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  Canon EOS 5D Mark II    EF70-200mm f/4L IS USM lens    189mm    f/4.0    1/640s    100 ISO    0.0 EV  






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  Canon EOS 5D Mark II    EF70-200mm f/4L IS USM lens    189mm    f/4.0    1/640s    100 ISO    0.0 EV  




May 07, 2013 at 11:24 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Tree With Hawk


I like the stark nature of the image - maybe a touch more contrast? Keep the hawk. Crop #2.

Regards,

Bob



May 07, 2013 at 11:29 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Tree With Hawk


Thanks, Bob.

Boosted the contrast a bit.



May 07, 2013 at 11:37 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Tree With Hawk


I'd keep the shot but I dont think it will sustain much interest for most viewers, unless it becomes part of a series.
My 2 cents.
Scott



May 07, 2013 at 11:52 PM
 

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Tree With Hawk


Might be one to get creative with to take toward a kind of abstract/graphic vibe ... Scott's point @ it's ability to sustain is a bit challenging. I'd explore "pushing it" to maybe enhance its staying power. Something out of the box ... or maybe not.












May 08, 2013 at 02:05 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Tree With Hawk


Kent, I do like how you've made the tree 'flow' through the shot more with the crop.

I'll play with it. :P

Thanks



May 08, 2013 at 03:25 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Tree With Hawk


I like Kent's first re-play. The texture adds interest.
Scott



May 09, 2013 at 05:58 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Tree With Hawk


sbeme wrote:
I like Kent's first re-play. The texture adds interest.
Scott


Scott - good point. It grabs my eye for more than a second, whereas I found myself kinda bored with my edit.



May 09, 2013 at 06:01 PM





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