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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Butter butts


The yellow rumpled warblers are back in town and it seems I found a good spot for them.

This is my first post in the critique forum, so go easy!

Charles








Apr 30, 2013 at 02:14 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Butter butts


I am looking on a crappy work monitor so keep this in mind.
Great shot.
Wonderful color, detail. Appears noise free.
Nothing needs to be done, in my opinion.
Alternatively you might consider a tighter crop, eliminating the broken branches upper left. You lose some of the environmental aspect but perhaps some distraction and allow a greater feast on the bird.
Hope to see more. This is fine work.
So, finally, since you seem to more than know what you are doing, what are your questions for Critique?
Scott



Apr 30, 2013 at 12:19 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Butter butts


What's to critique? It's beautiful! I agree with Scott on the tighter crop and eliminate the top left corner of broken branch, but other than that.......

Jo



Apr 30, 2013 at 06:52 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Butter butts


Thank you both! I can't really crop much more without compromising the quality too mich. This a very heavy crop on the 7D/500/4SIS.

I'll see if I can move the crop down a bit!

Thanks,

Charles



Apr 30, 2013 at 09:31 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Butter butts


I think that it has been oversharpened because I can see the halo around the bird. It should never be that obvious. Although a suitably sharpened image destined for print will usually look too sharp on screen, this one is meant for screen viewing.

Including EXIF data would be nice - and useful for others who are trying to learn from it.

- Alan



May 07, 2013 at 03:16 PM





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