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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Critiques on these three objects/photographs


Hi,

I am wondering how I can improve these images. I considered colour, patterns, use of lines, and overall effect of the images when taking these images. I would love some general feedback criticism. What you like, don't like, etc.


DSC_0207.jpg by addictedtoglass, on Flickr


DSC_0275.jpg by addictedtoglass, on Flickr


DSC_0265.jpg by addictedtoglass, on Flickr



Apr 29, 2013 at 03:45 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Critiques on these three objects/photographs


Of the three, I like the second image best because of the patterns and colors. The third image would be better to my eye if the shelf was level. I think the first would have been better if it had not been shot from below. The angle caused a lot of distortion and I would have preferred clean horizontal and vertical lines.


Apr 29, 2013 at 11:30 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Critiques on these three objects/photographs


Thanks for the feedback!


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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Critiques on these three objects/photographs


great eye on the picture with the containers. turns out i forgot to turn on my lens correction. thanks, again!


Apr 30, 2013 at 12:10 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Critiques on these three objects/photographs


I like them.
Second cuts off the edges of bowls that stand out from the repetitive elements above, this time featuring white backgrounds rather than more play with the reddish tones. Since it represents a different subject the cut at the bottom ends the series in a way that feels problematic. If all the bowls were more similar, a cut might just imply that the pattern continues on and on beyond the frame.
I agree with Jim on the third
First could use some work on lens distortion correction along vertical, horizontal and concave/convex dimensions and some vignette correction.
Scott



Apr 30, 2013 at 12:15 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Critiques on these three objects/photographs


Try correcting WB in the first image


May 04, 2013 at 06:59 PM





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