I love the processing and work on your website. This seems a bit flat, a bit dark, too obvious vignette - to me making it somewhat less refined. Does that make sense ?
Sorry not really going it for me either. I quite like the processing but I'm really not a fan of the composition, posing etc. The guy looks a touch awkward and has lots of things growing out of his head. Maybe move them to the middle and take advantage of the leading lines of the hand rails?