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Bob Jarman
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Tis the season...

Comments? Too centered?

Thanks,

Bob




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Apr 28, 2013 at 11:28 PM
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I might say too centered, yes... and the bloom at the bottom right is a bit distracting to me. Here's what I'd do:

Quick & dirty: You can see where I content aware filled the bloom; if I were better, I could probably make that cleaner...







Apr 29, 2013 at 02:07 AM
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I like the direction Ernie was going.
I agree about the distraction of the lower right corner bloom, and subsequent need to rebalance the blossoms in the frame. I wish you could have shot without that element. Without it, you might need to reduce the negative space on the left.
Scott



Apr 29, 2013 at 02:27 AM
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Ernie & Scott,

Thanks for your helpful comments - a little pre-planning or rearrangement could save lots of later headaches. Guess that applies to lots of things

Regards,

Bob



Apr 29, 2013 at 01:58 PM
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Bob Jarman wrote:
... a little pre-planning or rearrangement could save lots of later headaches. Guess that applies to lots of things


Bingo!!!



Apr 29, 2013 at 02:15 PM
 

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It's too centred and the image would benefit from some cropping from the right hand side and the distracting flower on the bottom right. This image would look great in the corner of the image, say maybe removing some from the bottom as well.


Apr 30, 2013 at 11:41 AM
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odnanref wrote:
It's too centred and the image would benefit from some cropping from the right hand side and the distracting flower on the bottom right. This image would look great in the corner of the image, say maybe removing some from the bottom as well.


Something like this?








Apr 30, 2013 at 11:39 PM
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Maybe just a bit looser, but I like this crop. Did the colors change between the photos? I like the little critter, I didn't notice that before the crop. -Paul


Apr 30, 2013 at 11:50 PM
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pinball_pw wrote:
Maybe just a bit looser, but I like this crop. Did the colors change between the photos? I like the little critter, I didn't notice that before the crop. -Paul


Color - somehow mangled that copy...separate version, thoughts?

Bob










May 01, 2013 at 11:35 PM





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