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Not having much luck finding cloud. Hope you enjoy. Your comments & suggestions are appreciated. Jim





The Mittens




Apr 26, 2013 at 10:25 AM
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Wonderful scene here, killer sky. Well done.


Apr 26, 2013 at 10:37 AM
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stanparker wrote:
Wonderful scene here, killer sky. Well done.


Thank you very much. Jim



Apr 26, 2013 at 12:01 PM
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Hey Jim,

That is a nice shot of the mittens, but what do you mean that you have had a hard time finding cloud(s)? You have a sky full of them, and they look nice.

One thought with the processing on this, the WB still appears to be slightly off, there is a very slight magenta cast in the buttes and the sky. Perhaps try a B&W version in addition to this?

Jim



Apr 26, 2013 at 05:36 PM
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JimFox wrote:
Hey Jim,

That is a nice shot of the mittens, but what do you mean that you have had a hard time finding cloud(s)? You have a sky full of them, and they look nice.

One thought with the processing on this, the WB still appears to be slightly off, there is a very slight magenta cast in the buttes and the sky. Perhaps try a B&W version in addition to this?

Jim


Thanks Jim. What I should have added is the clouds burn off by 10AM.. Best shooting is 6 AM - 9AM. I have the BW version posted in BW. I will adjust white balance some. Jim



Apr 26, 2013 at 05:50 PM
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This looks like it was shot later in the morning. Do you have any pre sunrise shots.

I agree with Jim, the white balance is off in the image. I'd also like to see a bit more pop out of the image, maybe a bit more contrast. As it sits, I find it a little dull, but composition is really nice.



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chez wrote:
This looks like it was shot later in the morning. Do you have any pre sunrise shots.

I agree with Jim, the white balance is off in the image. I'd also like to see a bit more pop out of the image, maybe a bit more contrast. As it sits, I find it a little dull, but composition is really nice.


I agree that the composition is really nice, but my eye is drawn to the ground and not the sky because it's so much brighter. Maybe bring down the exposure on the ground and brighten the sky.

I wish we had scenes like this in PA!



Apr 26, 2013 at 06:35 PM
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I like this one. The clouds are a little dark, but other than that...well shot.


Apr 26, 2013 at 08:13 PM
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chez wrote:
This looks like it was shot later in the morning. Do you have any pre sunrise shots.

I agree with Jim, the white balance is off in the image. I'd also like to see a bit more pop out of the image, maybe a bit more contrast. As it sits, I find it a little dull, but composition is really nice.


Thanks Chez.. I appreciate the feedback. Jim



Apr 27, 2013 at 12:12 AM
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morby wrote:
I agree that the composition is really nice, but my eye is drawn to the ground and not the sky because it's so much brighter. Maybe bring down the exposure on the ground and brighten the sky.

I wish we had scenes like this in PA!


Thanks Morby. I know what you mean about scenery. Being from SW Texas I am use to dust & sand; but here it is even prettier. I'll try you suggestions. Thanks, Jim



Apr 27, 2013 at 12:16 AM
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Sunny Sra wrote:
I like this one. The clouds are a little dark, but other than that...well shot.


I have a lighter version I will post later. Thank you. Jim



Apr 27, 2013 at 12:17 AM





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