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p.1 #1 · First portrait session with Kate, C&C welcomed


My first portrait session with my own lights/model and ... mistakes

C&C welcomed as usual.









#1

  Canon EOS 5D Mark III    EF24-105mm f/4L IS USM lens    84mm    f/5.0    1/200s    320 ISO    0.0 EV  







#2

  Canon EOS 5D Mark III    EF24-105mm f/4L IS USM lens    90mm    f/4.0    1/80s    400 ISO    0.0 EV  







#3

  Canon EOS 5D Mark III    EF24-105mm f/4L IS USM lens    75mm    f/6.3    1/160s    100 ISO    0.0 EV  




Apr 19, 2013 at 06:43 AM
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p.1 #2 · First portrait session with Kate, C&C welcomed


#1 cropped a little to tight and eyes seem out of focus
#2 Is my favorite of the 3, just don't get the bag in the pic...



Apr 19, 2013 at 09:57 AM
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p.1 #3 · First portrait session with Kate, C&C welcomed


The WB on #3 needs to be adjusted to match the other images.


Apr 19, 2013 at 12:32 PM
 



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p.1 #4 · First portrait session with Kate, C&C welcomed


Thanks guys, constructive comments, I was going for the colder look in #3, the bag was requested by the model . I have also found my first two sessions were generally too tight in terms of cropping, will try to loosen up in the future. Very cool girl though, will try to shoot her once more when feeling a bit more confident.

Thanks for taking the time to comment.



Apr 20, 2013 at 05:27 AM
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p.1 #5 · First portrait session with Kate, C&C welcomed


Actually, I think you can go tighter in #1. If you get rid of that empty space to the left of her wrist and crop all the way down to the top of her hairline it would make for a nice tight headshot with the net above her eyes. It would change the format to a more square one, like 5x4, but they're preferable for headshots anyway.

With #2, my eyes keep veering to the black hole on top of her head. Unlike #1 and #3, the net doesn't break it up enough. The exposure difference is too glaring.

Otherwise, I would say terrific job your first time out




Apr 20, 2013 at 06:29 AM
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p.1 #6 · First portrait session with Kate, C&C welcomed


Thanks M. still loooong way to go, no doubt about it...

It is amazing how much stuff you can miss in the heat of the shooting.

Cheers.



Apr 20, 2013 at 01:45 PM





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