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marko1953
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Family shoot


Spent a couple of hours with this family




























Apr 17, 2013 at 07:43 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Family shoot


Were these posted for a specific purpose?


Apr 19, 2013 at 05:14 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Family shoot


I hope you don't mind if I give some criticism. These felt a bit disjointed to me. It appears as though you weren't going for your standard portraits, but more of a 'morning with the family' approach. But other than the food in the 1st three, they don't really tie together to tell a cohesive story. I think the processing jumping around a bit, isn't helping much either. However, I do really like the processing in 1 and 3 a lot. I like the light and the intimate feel of the last one, although I do wish the baby was in focus and not mom, since the baby is the one looking at us.

Thanks for sharing
--David



Apr 19, 2013 at 01:19 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Family shoot


Agree with David, above.

In shots like the last one, you should try hard to get both subjects in focus. Find that perspective where both of them are the same distance from the lens. It's worth the effort.



Apr 21, 2013 at 06:10 PM





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