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| p.1 #2 · nsfw, just a couple for sharing, |
I want to start out by stating I'm not a professional, just providing some critique and comments.
1. I like the pose. The flare looks like it was intentional. I would like the model to be a bit more lit or lighter (more contrast in the scene). I would cut out some of the camera's right to make it a tighter crop.
2. Nice pose again, I'd tip the hat a little more to see more of her eye, because it is really hard to make it out right now in my humble opinion.
3. The snow (bright white) and trees are really distracting. Very dreamy/dream like expression, I like.
Thanks for sharing, I would love to see more work from you.