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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Ok Philly Boy Round 2! Old City E-session. Have I grown in a week? lol C&C for me please(17 pics) | |
You've got some good stuff here, I like the colours and lines in #1
The picture of the couple kissing in the BG of 4 and 5 also works
- I'd think about cloning out the word 'Apprais' on the RHS of 4, it distracts a little
- 5 is even better than 4
6 is OK but I think the BG picture dominates the shot a bit too much
Great lighting on her face in 7, pity that his is in shadow. Can you lighten his face?
Skin tones are a bit off in 8
Great lines in 11, 13, 14, 15, I like all of these, and the ring shot (16) is also nicely done
12 doesn't quite work for me, with the in-focus kid moving out of shot
I reckon they'll be very happy with these
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