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Archive 2013 · Solitude

  
 
Bob Jarman
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Minimalist approach - C&C appreciated,

Thanks,

Bob







Mar 27, 2013 at 08:26 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Solitude






Minimalist comment.



Mar 27, 2013 at 09:05 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Solitude


I *like* minimalism!

Maybe a bit more sky to add to the sense of open space?



Mar 27, 2013 at 10:29 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Solitude


RustyBug wrote:


Minimalist comment.



Thanks Kent,

Bob



Mar 28, 2013 at 03:09 PM
Bob Jarman
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Solitude


AuntiPode wrote:
I *like* minimalism!

Maybe a bit more sky to add to the sense of open space?


I debated on placement (crop) for the gull - more sky seemed top-heavy to me. Need to revisit for a fresh view.

Regards,

Bob



Mar 28, 2013 at 03:11 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Solitude


I really like this. I would try just at tad bit more sky to keep the image from being divided in the centre.


Mar 28, 2013 at 07:10 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Solitude


To accentuate the minimal, I would clone out the skyline stuff on the right, it gets the eyes attention, and lessens the minimal feel.


Mar 29, 2013 at 11:54 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Solitude


Travis Rhoads wrote:
To accentuate the minimal, I would clone out the skyline stuff on the right, it gets the eyes attention, and lessens the minimal feel.



Beabs & Travis,

Better?









Mar 29, 2013 at 03:55 PM
Travis Rhoads
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Solitude


For me, much better.


Mar 29, 2013 at 03:58 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Solitude


Agree - thanks for getting me there!

Bob



Mar 29, 2013 at 04:21 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Solitude


Oh yeah. I really like it this way. I like that you took out the stuff on the right. Image looks very clean and tidy.


Mar 29, 2013 at 05:22 PM





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