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This is a wedding portrait I shot on Saturday. I had some great advice from some on this forum that helped get this!

C+C!




  NIKON D700    35.0 mm f/2.0 lens    35mm    f/2.8    1/6400s    250 ISO    0.0 EV  




Mar 26, 2013 at 04:21 AM
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very nice. wish you had the bottom of the dress in there.


Mar 26, 2013 at 07:02 AM
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Me too. Thanks


Mar 26, 2013 at 05:15 PM
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Potentially a great photo but kinda ruined with a bridge running through their heads.


Mar 26, 2013 at 05:24 PM
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I see that now as well. I appreciate the response. Hopefully I have some more on my computer with a little different perspective/composition.


Mar 26, 2013 at 05:49 PM
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mgauthierphoto wrote:
I see that now as well. I appreciate the response. Hopefully I have some more on my computer with a little different perspective/composition.



As you evolve you will learn to see the final print in your viewfinder. Small things like a cutoff dress will stand out before you take the photo in the future.

Nice job.



Mar 26, 2013 at 07:33 PM
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The cutoff dress doesn't mean much to me. What caught my eye is the composition, including the bridge through their heads. What I'm looking at is a lot of hill to the left and a lot of blank sky at the top which makes them nearly centered. Not horrible by any means, just catches my eye.

Tone it down a bit too....maybe.



Mar 26, 2013 at 08:38 PM
 

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Thanks for the feedback. Tone it down saturation wise or...?


Mar 26, 2013 at 11:28 PM
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Yup, if you'd have knelt down about 18" or so, that'd be a killer shot. That's okay. This is how you learn.

I think the processing is fine.



Mar 27, 2013 at 12:30 AM
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M Lucca wrote:
Potentially a great photo but kinda ruined with a bridge running through their heads.


How would you have composed the shot?



Mar 27, 2013 at 01:05 AM
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The bridge pillars look a bit warped to me- i would try a little lens correction (LR?)

Nice shot though!



Mar 27, 2013 at 05:23 AM
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I think its a pretty shot regardless. I love the feel. Yes, I would have preferred the bridge not running through the heads but that's just us as photographers.

I think the couple will love it.

Good job.



Mar 27, 2013 at 01:44 PM
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Nice work, man! Glad you found a great location we talked about!


Mar 27, 2013 at 05:03 PM





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