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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Madeline


quick shoot with the 70-200 IS II. feedback is always welcome.


Please delete as I posted in the wrong forum.

Thank you. I apologize for the inconvenience



Edited on Mar 24, 2013 at 06:54 PM · View previous versions



Mar 24, 2013 at 11:06 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Madeline


Nice shot, you should try posting the picture in the People forum, you'll get more feedback
Bob



Mar 24, 2013 at 11:29 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Madeline


Wrong forum for this. I'd do a little PP work on that mole on her stomach.

Beautiful girl.



Mar 24, 2013 at 12:15 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Madeline


I personally find that to be an awkward pose.


Mar 24, 2013 at 03:12 PM
skasol
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Madeline


Thank u.


Mar 24, 2013 at 03:35 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Madeline


The background is mostly nice, but what looks like the random edge of a parking lot at the top is distracting. Either a higher viewpoint / different location for a solid green background, or at least a straight and un-cluttered "abstract" band across the top, would be better. You can probably fix this by cloning out or otherwise modifying the top background band.


Mar 24, 2013 at 04:19 PM
skasol
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Madeline


Thanks


Mar 24, 2013 at 04:28 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Madeline


Model is good - except for the lint, bra strap, ring, medieval bracelet and a missing earring.

Exposure is good.

Focus is good.

Pose and location both suck - is her hair stuck to some tree sap?



Mar 24, 2013 at 06:22 PM
skasol
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Madeline


Thank u for the critique


Mar 24, 2013 at 06:30 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Madeline


https://www.fredmiranda.com/forum/board/49


Mar 24, 2013 at 06:52 PM





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