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Well I am just an amateur as well but I will give you my thoughts. Overall not bad at all for a first attempt. Nice and sharp, tender moment, I am sure mom will love this. What would make it better in my humble opinion. I am not loving the position of dad's head, I would like it a little more upright. Perhaps if he was behind mom and looking over her shoulder. I guess I would just experiment. The only other nitpick, watch the hand chop, it would be stronger if their hands were included in the shot.
I might also have considered shooting from a slightly different angle to keep the dark tree behind them and avoid the blown out sky. These are just little things, it really is a nice image which I am sure they will love.