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p.1 #1 · 2nd Male Senior


Made some adjustments from the last set I posted.

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Thanks for looking.



Mar 22, 2013 at 03:14 PM
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p.1 #2 · 2nd Male Senior


Only seeing the dreaded red "X"
Douglas



Mar 22, 2013 at 04:56 PM
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p.1 #3 · 2nd Male Senior


Fixed now.


Mar 22, 2013 at 05:53 PM
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p.1 #4 · 2nd Male Senior



Face is a bit heavily processed, but a really nice set overall. Great job!



Mar 22, 2013 at 07:49 PM
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p.1 #5 · 2nd Male Senior


I think he'll like them, but I agree with friscoron, too heavy on the processing in the face and eyes for my taste.


Mar 22, 2013 at 07:57 PM
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p.1 #6 · 2nd Male Senior


Number 3, and to a lesser extent number 2, are kinda crotchy to me.


Mar 23, 2013 at 05:49 AM
 



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p.1 #7 · 2nd Male Senior


Steve Wylie wrote:
Number 3, and to a lesser extent number 2, are kinda crotchy to me.

I'm looking at the same place...It's like Bam...here's my crotch.



Mar 23, 2013 at 08:43 AM
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p.1 #8 · 2nd Male Senior


What others said, #2 isn't as bad (crotch), but #3 is very distracting in that regard. It literally has an "x marks the spot".


Mar 23, 2013 at 03:43 PM
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p.1 #9 · 2nd Male Senior


Especially with his posture and look. It's like he's saying, "You want some?"


Mar 23, 2013 at 03:46 PM
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p.1 #10 · 2nd Male Senior


Steve Wylie wrote:
Number 3, and to a lesser extent number 2, are kinda crotchy to me.


'Kinda' is an understatement. Male or female, the angle should be adjusted to avoid a direct look between the legs. Ruins the shots in my opinion.



Mar 23, 2013 at 03:59 PM
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p.1 #11 · 2nd Male Senior


I like the color of his eyes in 1, but they seem too over sharpened to me.


Mar 25, 2013 at 02:33 AM
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p.1 #12 · 2nd Male Senior


I see some issues with the compositions.

#1, for example - the pose with the arm out to the side doesn't look polished or well constructed when the arm leads out of the frame.

#2 almost has the foot included and #3 crops off the knee.

I think you need to plan out the compositions for the final finished product. Plan where those arms and legs will be in the frame. Keep a spot to make a clean crop for the head and shoulder shots. For example, #3 can't be cropped to Head and Shoulders and still look good.

That said, you are getting lots of things done well in this sequence. A sharp eye focus every time, for example.



Mar 25, 2013 at 10:41 AM





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