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p.1 #1 · First attempt at low key self portrait



Self Portrait by Revolution_X, on Flickr


Would love your C/C and how i can improve.

Thanks again



Mar 22, 2013 at 07:07 AM
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p.1 #2 · First attempt at low key self portrait


Yeah, this is definitely low key. Way low key. I think you probably have the lighting pattern down for a dramatic look; you just need to power up or open up the aperture a bit and let some more light in here. As it is, it's too dark.


Mar 23, 2013 at 05:47 AM
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p.1 #3 · First attempt at low key self portrait


Steve Wylie wrote:
Yeah, this is definitely low key. Way low key. I think you probably have the lighting pattern down for a dramatic look; you just need to power up or open up the aperture a bit and let some more light in here. As it is, it's too dark.


If the right eye had just a "souch" more light you would have nailed it.



Mar 23, 2013 at 06:49 AM
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p.1 #4 · First attempt at low key self portrait


Too low for me....and I like Low Key.


Mar 24, 2013 at 11:54 PM
 



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p.1 #5 · First attempt at low key self portrait


Post the next one much larger. Maybe 600 X 800 (almost 4 times larger).


Mar 26, 2013 at 07:06 PM
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p.1 #6 · First attempt at low key self portrait



I don't usually like low key, but I like this a lot!



Mar 26, 2013 at 08:57 PM
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p.1 #7 · First attempt at low key self portrait


I think it's perfect just the way it is. Very dramatic!


Mar 26, 2013 at 09:05 PM





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