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p.1 #1 · Senior - Shelby


I'm new to this forum, and Senior Photography, but I love this age group. Here is one of my clients. Constructive comments on improving are appreciated.





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Mar 22, 2013 at 03:49 AM
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p.1 #2 · Senior - Shelby


#3, looking at the photo on the left, her hair looks like armpit hair......I would either PS that out of there or would have adjusted her hair so as to not look like hairy armpits.....


Mar 22, 2013 at 04:08 AM
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p.1 #3 · Senior - Shelby


Good catch, thanks!


Mar 22, 2013 at 04:15 AM
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p.1 #4 · Senior - Shelby


Looks pretty good for the most part. The flash is a bit strong on some, but you're on the right track.


Mar 22, 2013 at 04:39 AM
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p.1 #5 · Senior - Shelby


1 and 2 look like snapshots. They have slightly better than average composition. Nice sunset but there's nothing that differentiates them from anyone who might pick up a camera, turn on the flash and take a picture. You need to get the lighting off-camera for this type of shot. That would be the ideal but aside from that you could also bounce the flash off a reflector or at the very least just bring it down some.

3 - Next time get those lights up higher. Lights coming up from below the face don't make for nice shadows. Also, in this one she has taken on a color cast from the walls more so than the others.


4 and 5 are headed more in the right direction as far as lighting goes though I'd like to see a touch of rim/hair light.

brad



Mar 22, 2013 at 12:50 PM
 



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p.1 #6 · Senior - Shelby


Brad, thanks for the comments. Flash was off camera, but I hear the comments on it being too hot.
I also, hear you on the rim/hair light comment. Appreciate the input.



Mar 22, 2013 at 03:49 PM
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p.1 #7 · Senior - Shelby


Welcome to the people forum! No. 5 is the best here, agree he flash is a bit strong in the first two.

Douglas



Mar 22, 2013 at 05:06 PM
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p.1 #8 · Senior - Shelby


Welcome to the forum. I agree that 5 is the best ,looking at 4 it seems she has not legs think I would look at the crop on this


Mar 22, 2013 at 08:06 PM
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p.1 #9 · Senior - Shelby


Maybe a warming gel to match the sunlight would help for the first two. Pretty model. Keep on posting.


Mar 22, 2013 at 08:25 PM





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