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| p.1 #2 · Meryl -- Skiing Senior Portraits -- Film |
It's been a while. Glad to see a set from you. I like senior portraits like this, because of the story involved. While I do like these, I'm not quite getting that 'Wow' feeling that I usually get from your shoots.
Here are some of the things I enjoy.
1 - Nice natural smile.
6 - Like the comp and the action here
7 - Really nice job panning here, she's pretty darn sharp, wish I could pan that well.
8 - Like the serious, I mean business, look.
a few nit picks
2 - not crazy about this one, comp just feels 'off' and her smile isn't quite the big gut laugh that warrants the closed eyes, if that makes sense.
3 - I wish that transition between the snow and trees wasn't cutting right at her forehead.
4 - I wish the presentation here was a little cleaner somehow. Feels kinda disjointed and the c/b exposures are a little different between them.
8 - just my own personal pet peeve, I wish her mouth was closed.