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Mark Metternich wrote:
Twisties wrote:
chez wrote:
Great light...but composition wise, I don't really like the focus to be bang right in the middle of the image. I know this works for some subjects, but I don't feel it works here.
I had the opposite reaction to the composition. The simplicity surrounding the stack allows it to work. The light is very nice.
I can see why it may not work for some. On this one I'm sticking to it, cause I like it. Yet, having said that, I am sure a square, or a 16:9 or even an off center would work too. I may very well try those as alternative versions. I do sincerely appreciate the feedback as always. It helps me peer into how people feel about an image which is very valuable and helps me make decisions about the future approach to the print.
Mark, as a suggestion, I would try a crop at about the edge of the large dark area in the foreground. That dark area really does not add anything to the image ( at least not for me ) and that would move the stacks away from center somewhat, at least in the vertical direction.
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