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Brad, I'm loving these. You really need to get into this more. As you've already said, this is not a complete set. HS Senior girls put a lot of thought into everything they wear for their shoot, and especially includes their shoes. I'm sure you have plenty for her, but even in a set like this for us, you'll usually want to include a full body shot, even more of an environmental shot.
No. 1 just rocks it for me. Love it. 2a not so much due to angle, but 2b I really like.
No. 3, I like a lot. Her face is really broad due to the light and she's squinting a bit, but it still works for me. With the light on her the way it is, I'd consider the shaded area a vignette and really work it. Right now, the shaded area is very bland, the color is not saturated, no contrast -- which is opposite of her face in the light. So add some contrast/clarity and color to the shaded area and I think the whole image will really pop.
4. Her face looks even broader here, just don't like this one. Might just be me.
5b, love; 6, love; 7, I really love this shot. Even Ed likes it, and he doesn't even like this shot!
8a and b, love! Great job! Let's see some more senior girls from you!