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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Dock and Store C&C Welcome


I finally posted for the first time today in Landscapes, so I figured in for a nickel, in for a dime. I would give a couple of recent B&W a shot as well.

These were shot with my D7000 and a 17-55 2.8

All C&C will be welcomed.

Thanks,

Randy





Old Store







Dock








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Mar 04, 2013 at 12:51 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Dock and Store C&C Welcome


Might get more detailed feedback on Critique where I hang.
I really like the mood of both images. Personally I am a great fan of decay and texture.
In the first my eye is immediately pulled up the trunks and branches of the center trees to the sky. It aids the mood, but leaves the building as a second point of interest. Works for mood, but I wish I could more readily take in the building. the newer homes on the sides add nothing. For this particular version I would go vertical eliminating the homes.
Second feels a bit tilted down left, but that may the dock and as it should be. I wish there were a bit more details in the wood. They seem to be there, but left fairly murky. I think this image works best as a fairly minimalist presentation, so I would eliminate almost all of the branches by cropping from the top to a bit above the son. I cant decide if the reflected light in the water detracts but it is natural.
My thoughts.
Hope it is helpful.
Scott



Mar 04, 2013 at 12:58 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Dock and Store C&C Welcome


I see what you mean about the store. Took your advice and re-cropped.

On the dock, yes it was leaning to the left



Mar 04, 2013 at 01:11 AM





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