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 p.1 #4 · Boy's Momma (Graphic and difficult imagery, NSFW) | |
Hi Mike,
First of all congratulations on your talent as a photographer. I saw your website and all images there were truly beautiful. I cannot citique your individual photographs because I think that alone they are all great. My only comment would be that when looking at the portfolio section of your website the "Models" section and "Fencing" section follow a particular visual style which is consistent and works really well together. When you go to the "Mother" section only some of these photos seem to go with that style and others do not. To me that feeling of inconsistency detracts from the overall feeling of quality of your body of work (although, like I said, I cannot individually ciritcise any of your photos because I think they are all great). It feels like a beautiful tapestry that starts to fray at the end. I think if you thin-out the selection the set will be much more powerful in both message and visual style. I can understand that in this series that may be easier said than done, since you have an emotional attachment to your subject, and every photograph probably has strong emotional meaning.
This is just my opinion. Amazing set and website otherwise.
Great job,
Fred
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