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p.1 #1 · Sunlit Bride


This is the first Bridal portrait I'm actually proud of (it's also the first time I was given (made) more than 5 minutes to do them.

If you have any critique or comments, I'd love to hear it!!







Thanks!
Zalmy



Feb 15, 2013 at 10:40 PM
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p.1 #2 · Sunlit Bride


Fantastic shot, I really like it. Definitely one to be proud of. Lovely subject too!

EDIT: Great website, by the way. Really enjoying your work



Feb 16, 2013 at 02:08 AM
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p.1 #3 · Sunlit Bride


Nice image! It was a smart move to have her head up and to the right when using direct sunlight. Helps to diminish harsh shadows.


Feb 16, 2013 at 03:14 AM
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p.1 #4 · Sunlit Bride


I totally dig this shot. It would only be 2 ounces better if the shadow to her right didn't connect with the body line. I love the colors, feel, and crop.


Feb 16, 2013 at 07:04 AM
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p.1 #5 · Sunlit Bride


I like the shot, maybe just help her out a little with some subtle skin softening. It's such a dreamy portrait, that I think you could get away with it. As Spencer said, maybe photoshop that shadow back and add more depth to the photo. Overall, love the tone a feel, well done!


Feb 16, 2013 at 12:24 PM
 

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p.1 #6 · Sunlit Bride


Solid shot, and as Jim said I really love the family work on your website!

-Lincoln



Feb 16, 2013 at 01:46 PM
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p.1 #7 · Sunlit Bride


Direct sun is so underutilised, I like the clean defined shadows it gives.

With this light I like to make the wb a bit yellow to look sunny, may a bit of retouch on this one too.



Feb 16, 2013 at 03:40 PM
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p.1 #8 · Sunlit Bride


Thanks guys, yeah Spencer, I'm a bit ticked off that I didn't pay more attention to the shadow, either have it more obvious it's her shadow (maybe shoot closer to the wall) or just move her away. Maybe I'll try to photoshop it out. I hate photoshop

Brian, I'm not sure about the skin softening, I kind of like the realism (but the bride might not ).



Feb 17, 2013 at 03:45 AM
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p.1 #9 · Sunlit Bride


I like this image but I think I would smooth the skin a bit to soften it up and give it a more dreamy flattering look


Feb 18, 2013 at 02:46 AM
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p.1 #10 · Sunlit Bride


I really love direct sunlight shots. Most people shy away from them.

I'd clean up her skin a bit, and you got yourself a winner!



Feb 20, 2013 at 06:07 PM





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