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p.1 #3 · My 1st attempt at Sports..Hockey | |
One and five are your best shots IMO. The others are either too loosely cropped (2) or too tight (3). You could even crop #1 tighter by removing some of the dead space above her
Having the puck in the shot adds to the picture tremendously as in 1. When it isn't in the shot, there should be either a really nice portrait or some other compelling action.
Also, looking at #3 you can see that the focus is on the knee rather than the face. Do you use the orientation sensitive AF points with the 5DIII? If not, I would suggest practicing with it (and get the grip if you plan on shooting a lot of sports...it is a must have for sports shooting) because in hockey there is usually enough contrast in the helmet for the focus to lock on. Place the AF point on the helmet and keep it there. surrounding expansion points can help too.
The first image is very nice. Well done.
Keep Shooting,
Peter
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