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p.1 #10 · Red Rock Canyon National Preserve | |
dalongfellow wrote:
Some quick thoughts: feel free to take them or leave them...
First: need to get rid of the vignetting and sensor dust at the top left.
Second: same dust on the top right and dust/bird on the right side.
Third: Looks like some cloning repeats in the clouds, especially the little bit of white sticking up into the blue about in the middle
Fourth: like the processing here--a little more restrained.
My preference would be to dial down the saturation and contrast a touch, but that's a preference/style thing for you to decide. I think my favorite is the second with the beautiful light on the mountains.
Dave
Okay Dave,
I'm new to LR and I made corrections based on your recommendations:
First: need to get rid of the vignetting and sensor dust at the top left

Second: same dust on the top right and dust/bird on the right side.

Third: Looks like some cloning repeats in the clouds, especially the little bit of white sticking up into the blue about in the middle

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