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p.1 #1 · Double Jeopardy

Probably the last one from Jaffrey's "special" weekend
Scott


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Canon EOS 5D Mark II 17 mm f/8.0 1/180 sec 400 ISO 0.0 EV

Feb 10, 2013 at 01:22 AM

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p.1 #2 · Double Jeopardy

after a couple of tweaks


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Feb 10, 2013 at 06:26 PM

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p.1 #3 · Double Jeopardy

lots of views, no comments
when I see images like this I find it hard to critique but not to determine if I like it or not.
So, does it create a sense of unease?
Does it engage?
Are there tweaks to improve it?
Is there a negative reaction to the style/processing?
Is the processing apropos to the content and intention of creating a somewhat disturbing, engaging, moody image?

Thanks.
Scott

Feb 14, 2013 at 06:55 PM

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p.1 #4 · Double Jeopardy

Scott,

I am completely neutral. When I first saw it I thought "OK, curious" but nothing held my attention or interest - perhaps the starkness?

But, I am curious the effect were the arrow in color? Perhaps a touch of drama?

Bob

Feb 15, 2013 at 12:42 AM

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p.1 #5 · Double Jeopardy

I had to look at the image for a moment or two to try and figure out what I was looking at. The lighting and lack of separation between the “arms” and the “trees” offers no separation between the subject and background… making it difficult to understand.

Feb 15, 2013 at 01:42 AM

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p.1 #6 · Double Jeopardy

Bob Jarman wrote:
Scott,

I am completely neutral. When I first saw it I thought "OK, curious" but nothing held my attention or interest - perhaps the starkness?

But, I am curious the effect were the arrow in color? Perhaps a touch of drama?

Bob

Bob,
thanks for your candid remark. Much preferred over no comment.
Scott

Feb 15, 2013 at 11:55 AM

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p.1 #7 · Double Jeopardy

itchhhh wrote:
I had to look at the image for a moment or two to try and figure out what I was looking at. The lighting and lack of separation between the “arms” and the “trees” offers no separation between the subject and background… making it difficult to understand.

One of those times where there is an image I feel invested in, yet sense something is not right. I want it to work, but agree with your critique and appreciate your offering it. The revision was meant to improve upon some of the separation, but the problem remains. I suspect the "face" is hard to discern as well. I know it stands out much better on a large image, but that shouldnt be necessary.

Thanks
Scott

Feb 15, 2013 at 11:57 AM

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p.1 #8 · Double Jeopardy

sbeme wrote:
Bob Jarman wrote:
Scott,

I am completely neutral. When I first saw it I thought "OK, curious" but nothing held my attention or interest - perhaps the starkness?

But, I am curious the effect were the arrow in color? Perhaps a touch of drama?

Bob

Bob,
thanks for your candid remark. Much preferred over no comment.
Scott

Thanks Scott,

Agreed and guilty - I too prefer the "news", good or otherwise, else how can we progress?

Bob

Feb 15, 2013 at 01:03 PM

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