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Just a few quick comments:
Cute kids make such great subjects for photos.
She is cute and looks comfortable in front of the camera (a good sign for the model and photographer).
I like image 1 the most from this set of 2. I like it because of the eye expression shown.
I would prefer to not see the hair on top of head blowing up. I suggest modifying your fan to prevent this in future, unless done for rare special effect.
I hope these comments help you.